{"id":3777,"date":"2015-03-09T10:01:21","date_gmt":"2015-03-08T21:01:21","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/thesislink.aut.ac.nz\/?p=3777"},"modified":"2016-08-01T10:08:13","modified_gmt":"2016-07-31T21:08:13","slug":"manuscript-march-the-drama-of-the-first-draft","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/thesislink.aut.ac.nz\/?p=3777","title":{"rendered":"Manuscript March: The Drama of the First Draft"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>What is a first draft?<\/p>\n<p>Maybe you&#8217;ve already produced one, maybe you&#8217;re working towards it, or maybe you&#8217;re thinking about how to start. But what is it, exactly?<\/p>\n<p>Is a first draft something that is pretty much finished? Is it a rough collection of notes that you&#8217;ll still need to work on for years? Is it a shiny beacon of brilliance that requires just a little spit-shine before it&#8217;s submitted? Or is it simply a chunk of text that is about the right length?<\/p>\n<p>I confess: for the first two years of my PhD (and this happened in the first 8 months of my Masters too, so you&#8217;d think I&#8217;d have learned my lesson) I naively thought of my thesis in terms of word count. &#8220;80,000 words and I&#8217;ll be done!&#8221; I&#8217;d say cheerfully. &#8220;Oh, I&#8217;ve written 40,000 words, I&#8217;m halfway there!&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>When I had 80,000 words, and they were all roughly proportioned out to various chapters in a sensible way, I still didn&#8217;t have a thesis. What I had was a collection of inconsistent sections. Some chapters were quite polished. Some were cut-and-paste bits of text that I&#8217;d placed under the relevant heading and intended to do something with. Some had been written so long ago that my topic had evolved and left them irrelevant.<\/p>\n<p>Nevertheless, the day I hit 80,000 words, I celebrated as if the hard bit was over.<\/p>\n<figure id=\"attachment_3788\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-3788\" style=\"width: 300px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><a href=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/thesislink.aut.ac.nz\/wp-content\/uploads\/Moet__1425846897_156.62.3.55.jpg?ssl=1\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-3788 size-medium\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/thesislink.aut.ac.nz\/wp-content\/uploads\/Moet__1425846897_156.62.3.55.jpg?resize=300%2C201&#038;ssl=1\" alt=\"Moet__1425846897_156.62.3.55\" width=\"300\" height=\"201\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/thesislink.aut.ac.nz\/wp-content\/uploads\/Moet__1425846897_156.62.3.55.jpg?resize=300%2C201&amp;ssl=1 300w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/thesislink.aut.ac.nz\/wp-content\/uploads\/Moet__1425846897_156.62.3.55.jpg?resize=150%2C100&amp;ssl=1 150w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/thesislink.aut.ac.nz\/wp-content\/uploads\/Moet__1425846897_156.62.3.55.jpg?w=400&amp;ssl=1 400w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-3788\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Just kidding. I&#8217;m a student. I celebrated with a Sprite and an hour of YouTube time.<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>Unfortunately, the hard part wasn&#8217;t over at all.<\/p>\n<p>By far the biggest psychological setback of my degree was the realisation that I wrote the right number of words, and I wasn&#8217;t anywhere near done. As it turns out, that&#8217;s a very common experience. As I&#8217;ve talked about my first draft dramas, I&#8217;ve heard from a lot of thesis writers &#8211; friends, colleagues, and graduates &#8211; who have been shocked by how long it takes to make a full-length draft work as a tight, cohesive thesis. Eva Lantsoght at <a href=\"http:\/\/phdtalk.blogspot.co.nz\/\">PhD Talk<\/a> quantified the hours she spent writing and rewriting her thesis, and I&#8217;m sorry to tell you, writing the first draft <a href=\"http:\/\/phdtalk.blogspot.co.nz\/2013\/06\/writers-lab-how-much-time-does-it-take.html\">accounted for only a third<\/a> of her time commitment. Rewriting is a huge job, and one that I certainly underestimated.<\/p>\n<p>Does this mean that we should all give up in frustration? Of course not. But if I were to give advice to my past self, I would tell her to talk to her supervisor and get on the same page about what a first draft is. I would tell her to consider the first draft as a milestone, not a finish line. I would tell her to budget a lot of time for revisions. And I would share her Sprite on 80,000 Words Day, because writing that much <em>is <\/em>an achievement, even if it&#8217;s not the end of the road.<\/p>\n<p>There is a lot to like about the revision process. You never again have to face a blank page. You have lots of ideas and expertise to work from. You can zoom out and look at your thesis as a whole, if that helps you. And if you get bored of revising one chapter, there are plenty of others to work on.<\/p>\n<p>I think the key to surviving life after the first draft is to manage your expectations. The thesis is not done. The floppy hat of graduation is still a ways away. But at least it&#8217;s closer.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>What is a first draft? Maybe you&rsquo;ve already produced one, maybe you&rsquo;re working towards it, or maybe you&rsquo;re thinking about how to start. But what is it, exactly? 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